Wonderfulness.
Wow...this thing got off to a rocky start (not the factory scene, which I liked, the director/eyepatchman conversation), but after sitting through the entire thing, I can safely say that this thing rocks the socks. Really, really well done. The highlight for me was the arcade scene. Lots of funny jokes there, and some really nice music as well. Great job with that, too, btw, I really liked the pop-techno feeling you gave your flash. Congrats on getting your front page!
Oh yeah, and also, do they really have arcades in the UK/Britain/London/England wherever you're from? Or ANYWHERE?